Rhyl Dunbar from a few strips I did for a second story. The walking stick would also have been an energy blade. |
This is the opening to the third version of the Hybrid-Worlder, though I think by now that the story had changed, eliminating the hybrid-worlder by converting the creature to a pet or bio-bot of a criminal, mirroring the change I made from a story to a comic book.
It is interesting for me to see how many little items that I included in The Bright Black Sea that have been floating around in my head most of my life. As I mentioned, when I set out to write the Litang stories, I chose to go with rocket ships instead of starships just to go full retro. Other than getting by without "artificial gravity", I didn't make too many changes -- I just moved all the planets I thought I'd need a lot closer...
That said, here's the opening;
Chapter
One
The
celestial cargo ship, Cir Ay Cey had arrived in Aero Day world orbit
a triwatch ago and now lay the prescribed 100 meters astern of the
buoy-satellite 7157. Moars Crimptyn, or first officer, was aft in the
cargo control tower overseeing the disembarking of our container
holds of Aero Day cargoes. Captain/Owner Briter Kedinn was downside
on ship’s business. I held down the harbor watch on the ship’s
bridge.
It
was my job to monitor the ship’s systems, avoid collisions, repel
pirates, harbor thieves, and bum-boat merchants. But mostly it was to
act in loco parentis for the members of the ship’s company
downside, at leas in Aero Day orbit. I had little to do just yet
because the crew had not been downside long enough for the calls to
start coming in to raise bail, extend credit or pick up the pieces of
shipmates. Consequently, I sat slumped in a deck chair, feet propping
up the bridge railing, and dreaming in the warm Aero Day sun of my
downside leave on Yisvaalr, the moonlet that served as Aero Day’s
port. It was going to be a downside leave fit for a hero.
The
communicator implant in my right ear sparked to life. ‘Kedinn
calling the Cir Ay Cey. I’m on my way up,’ snapped the Skipper’s
voice in my ear.
I
flipped a though-activated switch opening the ship’s transmitting
channel and said a’loud, ‘Cir Ay Cey acknowledging, Captain.’
My voice echoed hollowly in the silence of the otherwise deserted
bridge.
I
thought-switched to the ship’s array of sensors. Connect by the
ship-link – a neuro-cybernetic interface with the ship’s
computers and sensors – I was able to monitor all ship systems,
ship functions with the speed and directness of thought. I watched
the Skipper’s 30 meter gig, identified by its radio beacon, shot up
from the Small Craft Port on Yisvaalr and twist its way through the
crowded orbital roadstead. As it closed with the Cir Ay Cey I climbed
to my feet and leaned against the railing to watch its final
approach.
Through
the crystal hull plates that enclosed the Cir Ay Cey’s navigational
bridge I looked out upon a brilliantly beautiful vista. Less than a
hundred kilometers away floated the smuggy grey-brown sphere of
Yisvaalr, and beyond, smaller, brighter, floated the world of Aero
Day, blue and sparkling white. Overhead hung the golden globe of Aero
Day star, driving away the shadows of stars on the bridge, sparkling
of the brass fittings and making the pale teawoon wood deck and
darker cabinets glow. And against the blackness of space, the silver
haze of the Inlopar Star Cluster and the ten thousand stars of the
AeroDay Cluster, like scattered jewels, glistened the laser beacons
of the cestial shipping in orbit and the shooting stars of the
lighters and countless small craft weaving amongst the teeming
stellar anchorage.
Suddenly
the green and silver gig was alongside, sliding slowly towards the
boarding dock that extend from the main airlock. As the gig’s hatch
matched the Skipper deftly matched velocities and I directed the jaws
of the outer dock to close to secure the gig and seal a free air link
with the gig. A minute later the Skipper reached the bridge.
Captain
Kedinn was carrying a small aluminum case bearing the black and
silver crest of the Aero Day Celestial Survey Society. It contained
the computer navigational records of other ADCSS member ships who had
recently sailed for the world or worlds we proposed to make our next
port of call. The records are used to update and expand our ship’s
own charts.
‘Welcome
aboard, Captain,’ I remarked respectfully.
Kediin
tossed the charts case across to me. ‘Input these plots and begin
to update our charts. I want to see the fastest Kantea On orbit you
can devise. You have ten triwatches.
I
snagged the fly charts case, but stood rooted to the teawoon wood
planks of the bridge. ‘Surely the charting can wait until after the
refit is completed,’ I protested.
I
saw in Kedinn’s eyes something that might have been fear – for an
instant – before they became awash with anger.
‘We
slip orbit for Kante On in ten triwatches. I will give you the
special code to release Captain Knzar-Rode’s Kantea On orbit
charts. Everything must be completely updated and courses plotted
before we sail,’ snapped Kedinn.
I
stood and stared at Captain Kedinn. I had served under Briter Kedinn
for almost fifteen ship-years. I knew him and his methods pretty
thoroughly. Captain Kedinn is a solid built hominoid specimen. His
shoulders are broad and muscular, his midships bulges, his legs are
short and solid, his arms almost massive. His untamed hair is black
and he sports a full beard that curves forward along the outer edge
giving his face the suggestion of a brooding war-ax. From beneath his
thick eyebrows, his dark eyes sparkle, under the best conditions,
with a fierce sort of bonhomie. But in port, with a planet looming
about, the bonhomie is missing, for Kendinn hates planets. He rarely
goes downside and is always in a great rush to clear our cargo and
put the hated things astern. Ship’s company ascribe this reaction
to planetphobia, said to be common amongst those, like Kedinn, who
are born and raised of sarfeer parents aboard ships. Kedinn’s
explanation is that the ship earns money in passage and costs money
in orbit. Likely it is a combination of both. But in any event,
Briter Kedinn is a pure sarfeer, born to live in the cold light of
stars aboard a tiny world that plies the vast nave of creation. But
though I knew the Skipper well, I had not expected this.
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