Hybrid-worlder
Version 2 (The Forgotten Version)
I’ve only included
the opening scene. We open on Yisvaalr this time, in the Knyme-sooh
and then work our way back to how Rhyldunbar got there. Looking over
the original manuscript I can see lines drawn through paragraphs and
pages, so I guess that is how I trimmed 8,000 words off the original
version. I don’t think the story changed, however.
These stories are
set in a full fledged starship universe where ship cheat relativity
and sail hundreds of times the speed of light. Now, I think there are
still enough unknown unknowns in both the universe and physics that
one can write faster than light drive stories and not call them
fantasy. That’s my story, anyways and I’m sticking with it.
However…
Rhyledunbar was a helmsmate of a starship. He controlled the fields
that drove the starship via thought transmitted by a control link
that he wore around his neck. I adopted this same basic approach to
my Wil Litang stories as a com link that did much the same thing.
When this story was written some 35 years ago, I did could not
imagine how powerful computers could be, and how fast they became
that powerful. If I wrote this story today, there is no non-fantasy
way I could have a human controlling a starship. The computers of
100,000 years in the future would be so far superior to any human
reaction, that a human controlling a star ship would be an order of
magnitude less likely than the starships themselves. Though, in
truth, humans being around 100,000 years from now, is probably an
order or two less likely than controlling a starship. It is hard to
imagine that our robotic overlords will bother to keep us around that
long.
In my Wil Litang
stories, I had to usher the robots off stage with an ancient revolt,
and have humans limit the power of machines so that I could have
human pilots. I also made my human characters familiar, almost
completely ignoring 80,000 years of social evolution that one could
easily imagine would make humans, if they exist 80,000 years from
now, very alien to us. I also had to turn a blind eye to 80,000 years
of machines, smarter, more powerful, and more connected than humans.
I don’t think you can realistically ignore that. I rather think
humans – machine making biological beings of all sorts everywhere –
are the penultimate development of the true intelligent beings –
machines. A noble role.
Anyway, on to the
story fragment:
The
Hybrid-Worlder
Being
an Account of One Down-side Watch on Yisvaalr
1
Within
the Knyme-sooh the air was heavy and aromatic with the flavors of
Chantsom Yea. The sapphire light of a simulated Chantsom Yeaian day
smiled upon the three tiers that circled the dining hall and it
played on the crystal foliage of the transplanted Chantsom Yeaian
jungle that rose up through the hollow core of the hall like a frozen
fountain.
I,
However, sat in aquatic gloom at a booth at the base of the
jungle-garden – in the deep shadows under the lowest balcony.
I
took a sip of xanifa and savoured its warmth, its richly mellow
flavor. At last! (I thought) I was clear of the hectic press of my
shipboard duties… Not that it mattered. Less than a tri-watch
remained of our stay in Aero Day orbit, and my vision of an extended
fue de joie amongst the dens and dives of Yisvaalr’s Starfarers’
Quarter were dead beyond recall.
Damn
the Skipper! (I cursed, softly to the shadows). We were 844
tri-watches out of Sanisfa orbit and in need of a long downside break
in the tedium of shipboard life. He had indicated that Aero Day was
to be this break, but almost before we had settled into our berthing
orbit around Aero Day world, he had arrange for us to race the Minery
Var out to Kantea-on.
To
sail with the Minery Var we had to clear Aero Day in a rush.
Down-side watchers were at a premium as all hands labored watch on
watch to clear the Shadow of Dreams’ container-holds of her
Aero Day cargo, conduct a hasty refit, and scare-up an outbound
cargo.
Being
the Shadow’s helmsmate, I spent our fortnight in Aero Day
orbit closeted in the ship’s chartroom trying to plot a course that
would – at least – gibe us a chance of beating the Minery Var
to Kantea-on. It was not until late in our second-to-the-last
tri-watch in orbit that I was able to put the finishing touches on my
orbits, but nevertheless, worn and weary, I stumbled off in search of
the Skipper, determined to extract a two-watch leave downside.
I
found him in the ship’s office. The interview was far from cordial.
‘No!’
he snapped at my request. ‘We’re too close to sailing to let you
loosed down on Yisvaalr.’
‘But
Skipper...”
‘I’m
sorry – No! I know you, Rhyldunbar. You’d just run a’muck.’
I
held my temper. Calmly I pointed out to him that I’d not gotten
off-ship – either on business or for pleasure – since our arrival
in Aero Day orbit, that I had earned a down-side watch, that – like
everyone else – I needed one.
‘Perhaps,’
he allowed with a shrug. ‘But I can’t risk losing you this close
to sailing. There’s just too much riding on this race to risk being
caught a helmsmate short at sailing. And it’s not all the money
we’ve wagered backing our chances – for we can afford to lose the
race...’
‘Aye
– thanks to you we’ve not had a chance to spend our wages! I’ve
been off-ship a total of two watches in the last 844...’
‘Thanks
to me, you’re a wealthy sarfeer!’ he retorted with an angry edge
to his voice. ‘I intend to make you even more wealthy, which is why
I’ve arranged to race the fastest ship in the whole Kantea-on
fleet. If we can beat her – and I think we can – we’ll have
reestablished the Shadow’s reputation as the fastest celestial
clipper ever built for the Kantea-on trade. With this single stroke,
she’ll once more command the highest rates, the earliest loadings,
and the finest xanifa. In short, my dear Helmmate, we can take our
plac in the fore fo the Kantea-on fleet right fromour first venture.
‘But
we must win this little race, and we need yo to do it. So I want you
here, aboard ship and sober for tomorrow. There’ll be time enough
to get down- and off-ship on Kantea-on. But for now… I’m sorry
but; no.’
I
drew a deep breath.
A
lessor sort of sarfeer might have contented himself with a few choice
curses under his breath, a sullen glower, and then, with a resigned
shrug, stalked off to his cabin for a well earned, and much needed
rest. But not I.
With
844 tri-watched of shipboard life, starship moss meals, and the past
fortnight of slaving over the glowing charts behind me, I was in a
most dangerous mood. Even so, it was only after I had advised the
Skipper that I had not gotten around to signing the Articles to
Kantea-on yet – that I was free to leave the Shadow right
then and there – and that I would, unless I got my down-side watch,
that he, at last, relented and allowed me and a score of my shipmates
down-side leave on Yisvaalr for a ‘watch and no more’.
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