My reviewer criteria. I like light, entertaining novels. I like smaller scale stories rather than epics. I like character focused novels featuring pleasant characters, with a minimum number of unpleasant ones. I greatly value clever and witty writing. I like first person, or close third person narratives. I dislike a lot of "head jumping" between POVs and flashbacks. I want a story, not a puzzle. While I am not opposed to violence, I dislike gore for the sake of gore. I find long and elaborate fight, action, and battle sequences tedious. Plot holes and things that happen for the convenience of the author annoy me. And I fear I'm a born critic in that I don't mind pointing out what I don't like in a story. However, I lay no claim to be the final arbitrator of style and taste, you need to decide for yourself what you like or dislike in a book.
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Waterfront by Richard Woodman DNF 19%
Well, at least I can say that I really like the cover of this edition of the book. I also like that the story is set aboard a tramp steamer in the early 1900's. I love the lore of tramp steamers, so it should have been a winner. But...
I make no claims to be a patient man, and this story tried my patience to the breaking point. It just meandered aimlessly around for the first several chapters. We start with the prologue; the fictional bio of the early life of the main character James Dunbar. Fine, I guess, if unnecessary. Chapter One opens with our hero, Dunbar, now an apprentice aboard a tramp steamer, and we met an old sailor, Dunbar's unofficial mentor, Williams. After a few pages it changes focus, location, and characters to the captain and mate, discussing their cargo and the Mexican port they are calling on. And then it shifts focus to the backstory of the captain for a few pages, and then on William's backstory covering his years at sea, before shifting back to the port of call in Mexico, briefly, before going back in time to Dunbar's first days aboard the ship at the start of this voyage. And then back to the present, briefly, before going back to Dunbar's youth and an early romance, of sort. Where it meandered after that I can't say, since a this point I just gave up.
I will readily admit that I prefer stories told in a fairly linier fashion, and stories that focus on one principle character. This story was just too disjointed for me to get into. I came for a sea story, not for all the back stories of the characters that littered the pages for the first three chapters. I think that one could work those stories into an ongoing narrative that drove the story forward without all these asides. Indeed, I have no idea why the story didn't start with incident - a storm at sea - described when the ship was first setting out. It would've made a far more compelling opening than the one the author chose to start with. All the other character building could've been done with incidents on the voyage from England to the west coast of Mexico. Still, as usual, all this is on me, the book wasn't delivering on what I expected, and wanted.
I suppose that this book settled down, eventually. But after sitting on my shelf for a few days in the middle of chapter three, I decided I wasn't going to force myself to push on and find out. The ebook was a two book boxed set, but as I found out when looking him up to see if there are any more in the series (no), I discovered that many years ago, I had read a book or two in his Nathaniel Drinkwater series of Napoleonic era naval stories - but only one or two, as they were not, as I remember, all that good. I think he was the one who had his hero, Drinkwater, crash his little ship into a vast enemy three-decker at the battle of Trafalgar, slowing it down just enough for Nelson's ship to come alongside, and well, the rest is (real) history. That historical invention was just too over the top for me, since, as you know, I'm a bit of a stickler for somewhat accurate history in historical fiction. In any event, Woodman has written over a hundred naval adventures in a variety of series. It's just too bad I'm not a fan of his stories.










