I've released
version 3.4 of The Bright Black Sea. I would like to thank Walt for
pointing out some typos that remained in version 3.3. I corrected
those as took the opportunity to add a few sentences to
deal with a couple of small things issues that I wanted to address.
The first was that
as the story evolved, medical technology sort of evolved as well –
and I had Captain Miccall dying on page 1 while at a full medical
center. I added a sentence to explain that – Miccall was old, over
the "Unity Standard" life span of 200 and a decade or two more
years. This life span is limited by biological factors and the
ability of the med-machines to manipulate older cells. And perhaps by Unity policy as well.
I should mention
that the human specie in these stories, which are likely set some 80K
years in the future, are “homo stellar” rather than homo sapien. In
addition to being far more tolerant of weightless conditions than
current humans, they have a far more robust body and immune system in
order to tolerate a wider variety of non-Terran worlds. I would
assume this was done by design rather than by evolution. I should
acknowledge that by keeping my characters very human and familiar, in
effect, turning a blind eye to 80,000 years of social and
technological evolution, I'm cheating. The humans 80,000 years from
now, if they exist, are likely very different from us – but I have
no interest in exploring just how.
The second place I
added a few sentences is where the Lost Star is accelerating on it's
interstellar voyage to Zilantre. I have them accelerating to “Mark
7”, more than twice as fast as normal, and so the pseudo-gravitational effect
of inertia would be something like twice what than they were
accustomed to during normal acceleration and braking. I wanted to
mention that effect in passing. While I tried to keep my cheating
with physics to a minimum, I did not go so far as to calculate just
how fast the ship needed to be going, and how fast or long it needed to be
accelerated to reach that speed. From my research it seemed that you
can get pretty far, pretty fast by accelerating at 1 gravity for
extended periods of time, so I don't think it would have been much
more than that, it's just that being used to free fall, any gravity
was a pain for spaceers – though being homo stellar, they could
easily adopt to it after prolonged periods of weightlessness.
Again, thanks to
Walt and all the others who have helped make the story more enjoyable
for the readers that follow them. Once The Lost Star's Sea is nearing
completion, hopefully this coming spring, I will be putting out the
call for volunteer beta readers. I'll offer more detail when it's
closer to the time, but if you think you might be interested, just
email me at cmlitka@gmail.com and I'll put you on the list to get the details.
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